Amelia Zhao

[Amelia Zhao]

The Basics

Name: Amelia Zhao
Nicknames: Mellie, Leah, Amy and anything else you can come up with.
Age: 19
Orientation:  Homosexual
Desired Rank/Job: College freshmen at Greenvieew.
Powers: Amelia has the power of Telekinesis. She can manipulate objects but only to about how much she could lift physically  as she hasn't yet trained herself to pick up things heavier then she can physically  pick up. The more she can lift or bench press the more she can lift with her mind it seems like. Side effects she gets  are migraines and have phantom limb sensations.
Play By: Amber Liu

The Details

Hair Color: I have short black hair with blonde highlights but i'm thinking about changing it soon to all blonde.
Eye Color: blue
Any Piercings? Two in each ears.
Any Tattoos? One day soon but alas none right now.
Any Scars? Once when I was like 10 I tried crowd surfing when I was performing in a talent show. I wouldn't suggest crowd suffering threw elementary kids because I fell off the stage and I'm not sure what I scrap my leg on still but that's on my left leg. Then the scar on my arm from dropping off the tree is the biggest. You know if i don't sum it up i'll be on this part forever. I have lots and lots of scars.
General Appearance: A lot of people tend to think i'm cute and dare I say it hot. Maybe it's the whole me being Chinese thing. From what I can tell us Americans like are Asians as much as British accents. Side note: If i had a British accent I probably would be unstoppable.

This one girl who originally thought I was a guy told me after she found I wasn't that  I made her question her sexuality. So I guess if you want to rate me on a scale from 1 to 10 i'm hot enough to make you question you orientation. Like i'm Bruno Mars or something. The funny thing that wasn't the last or first time I heard that.


You know I don't get offended when people think i'm a guy. I mean I can see why with the short hair , my non existent chest,  (seriously i'm  an A cup), and I have a pretty unisex face. None of my features screams i'm a female but they also don't say i'm a man either. It always come down to what i'm wearing to see if i'm going to be a hot boy or a pretty adorable girl. Seeing how i'm not one to wear dresses or skirts a lot it's usually the latter. I can't tell you how many misunderstanding I have gotten in to because people thought I was a boy though.

Uh my choice of fashion I would describe as a girly-tomboy. I wear make-up and like girl clothes sometimes but never too girly I guess if that makes sense. Unless i'm going to see my mother because you know no one has time to hear her opinion on dressing like A lady.


I'm 5'3 with a pretty nice body you could say. I mean my stomach is slender , like I said training bra chest, my arms have some muscles, and toned legs. Is there something i'm missing appearance wise?

I think I covered it all.
Personality: As you might already see or find out while reading the rest of this bio I am very silly. I'm always joking around and being silly but I do know when to be serious. Their a time like funerals or when their something wrong with someone to quite the jokes and be for real but if it's not one of those times i'm going to be laughing and joking. I'm a very happy and perky person and yeah it can irritate the H-E- double hockey sticks out of people sometimes. I get excited easily and have lots of energy.  There moment where i'm  like "Let do something epic" and people are like "lets not and say we did".  Then their other times were i'm super lazy and just want to sit in bed and play video games and read comics. I also as of lately have been having my lonely and depressed moods. They hit out of nowhere.

    I have a big heart like my daddy said so i'm always trying to help people and cheer people up. I'm the friend you go to when you need to bash your ex or current boyfriend or need some advice or just want to cry your eye out and eat chunky monkey while watching the notebook. I will be there for you no matter what. Whatever you need I got you. Though dealing with other people's issues can really take a toll on me but I wont let anyone know. I've always just put people feelings and problems before myself. I just want everyone to be happy but that sometimes gets in the way of me being happy myself.  I also just don't want to hurt or disappoint anyone so it makes it hard for me to say no to people no matter how much I want to. I tend to give people whatever they want from me.  I especially give into girls and even more so if they are older then me. My brother says I have mommy issues.

As a performer i have to be very out going. I like meeting new people and talking to random stranger. Its not unheard of me to go up to someone I don't know and compliment them and then have a conversation like we have been friends for years. It's easy to get along with me I think. The only time i'm shy is when I start falling for someone or I find a girl to be really pretty.  When I think someones pretty or admire them for whatever reason i get tongue-tied around them and trip over my words and laugh. I tend to  laugh a lot and very awkwardly when i get nervous. It's not a pretty site.

I'm very trusting with everyone I meet in till given a reason not to be. Everyone is innocent to they are proven guilty right? I just like to see the good in people but in doing that it blinds me to all the bad. Even when I get to the point I can't ignore it anymore and I finally confront you it can be pretty easy for you to make me forgive you. I can't really stay mad at most people for long no matter what they have done to me. If i chose to care and trust you it is hard for me to stop. 

I'm a music lover as I will mention threw out this post. My life is like a musical because sometimes I stop and breakout in song or i'm always humming something. My day has never gone without me singing or playing an instrument or listening to music. 

Your Vices

Likes: Girl with white dress, something with noodle, snowflakes that stay on my noes and eyelashes. Brown paper package tied up with string . These are a few of my favorite things. Sound of music anyone? Well then how about Casey from skins video diary? I like girls on skateboards and boys on swings. No ...well anyway lets get serious then.

As nice as those things are their not my favorites. I love working out, the beach, meeting new people, playing with animals, beating sexes guys at things like basketball or video games, the rush I get preforming on stage in front of people, the beginning and the end of each season, anything music related, sports, cuddling with my dog, video-games, fashion, dancing, romantic comedy's, and seeing really adorable couples being well really adorable.
Dislikes:      I can't stand stereotypes for starters. Also people who judge, hate, arguing with people i care for, guys who try to hit on me when I tell them i'm gay but the worst of those are the ones who say I just need the D. Like are you kidding me? Unless your Bruno Mars it's always going to be no. God Bruno is hot enough to make a girl question her sexuality again. Let me stop before I start fangirling over here. Now where was I? Oh right don't get me started on when I lose in black ops. Especially if it's because some dumb newbie is messing up. That can run my mood for an hour at least.
Strengths:

• A lot for instrument but if you at least one in particular well I don't mean to toot my own horn but back in high school I played a mean clarinet.
• Communicating with people is one of my strengths. Unless it's someone i love or have a crush on because i can get all flustered and tongue-tied.
• I'm a pretty tough girl. I can protect myself and others. After all I do take boxing and use to take kick boxing.
  
• Being a good listening ear.
  
  
• Patient.
• I'm a pretty fast learner. 

Weaknesses:

• My daddy always said my big heart is one. I want to always help everyone no matter what.
  
  
• I don't like disappointing or hurting the people i care about. It drives me to try and please everyone and myself but I've been working on it trust me.
• Cookiedough. Get me some cookie dough ice cream and I will obey your every whim.

Fears: Losing someone i'm close to and of clowns. Don't laugh at me their creepy looking.
Secret: If  I tell you you got to promise to keep this between us OK? Alright so I still keep this teddy bear my ex girlfriend gave me. As much as i say i'm over her there's still apart of me that's not but i'm so ready to move on and forget about her. Just haven't found the right person to help me yet.

Family Ties

Father: My lovely father name is Jianguo but we people just call him Jay.
Mother: Josephine. 
Siblings: My one and only brother is Jason who 22. Yeah i'm the only one with a A name because i'm special. 
Any Other Important People: I have a little 11 month old baby pit name summit. As much as I joke about her being a little vicious killing machine she a harmless little puppy. About as vicious as a two year old child. Wait I take that back my two year old niece Zara is kind of vicious. The kid just likes to attack me once out of nowhere.

History

    See when a mommy and a daddy love each other very much and their older son is out the house they do a special hug-- and i'm just going to cut myself of their. I realize if I keep going down this road and a image sufferance their is no going back.

Gather around boys and girl it is time to tell the great tale of Princess Amelia. In a far away land know as New York city I was born as the second child and was cursed with being the only girl and also the most charming child of the Zhao family. Jason will try and say he the most charming child but nope it's me remember that. My mother must of saw it from a young age because she decided to put me in pageants the moment I learn how to walk. I like to refer to this dark time in my life as "The Hairspray era" because the smell of it is the main thing I remember. Yes I was once one of those girls with the crazy pageant mom who dressed me up as a little white and Chinese barbie doll. Not only was I pageant girl though I was a winning one. A force to be reckon with because I was winning tittles back to back all across the land. Didn't mater if I was the youngest or the oldest is my category because I was taking them all down with just a flip of my use-to-be long hair. I was a performer even back then taking over the stage is just what I did.

    Being in pageants and practicing for pageant seem to be the only thing that was allowed in my schedule besides you know going to school. Making friends at school was never a hard thing to do. They thought I was pretty and I was well-liked. I never got bullied or anything it was just that I didn't have time to keep up with my friendships. In away i guess this is good because it made me closer to my family because they were pretty much the only people I could talk to all the time outside of school. So I became a daddy's girl and me and my brother are very close despite the three year age difference. To say i didn't harvest feeling of hate towards my mom because of my childhood back then and still some now would be an lie though so how about I just say nothing. If you don't have anything nice to say don't say it in till you're fucked up enough to be in therapy and say it their right?

Though for my most part I was isolated because of the tight schedule she kept me and my brother on my mom did let me take lessons  outside of pageant only because I could be very versatile in the talent portion of the competition. Me and Jason took a lot of lesson which most was private with just us and the teacher but some was public like most music classes. So that's how I discovered my love for both performing and all things musical. I.e dancing , singing,the guitar, piano, and rapping. Sometimes I even did a mean stand-up. Taking these classes it made me realized when I was eleven I only loved the talent portion of the shows more than anything else because it was the only time I was being myself. If I was being honest with myself I hated the dressing up and parading around the stage smiling like a little mannequin. I was scared to tell my mom the truth so i just kept doing them. It made mad at her and myself that I couldn't just tell her I wanted to be done. I just knew she would be disappointed in me.

One day when I was 12  ( Jason had to be 15 at this time ) though I did get the courage to tell her and boy did that conversation get escalated. An isn't just like a metas power to manifest at a time of heated discussion. Long story short she was yelling and for life of me I don't remember what she said that pissed me off so bad but my powers came. It was my mother , me, and Jason in the kitchen and I was looking a her with such hate at that moment and things started flying off the walls everywhere. Then right when this knife was about to hit my mother it stopped and I looked over to see that my brothers hand out reached towards the knife and as he put his hand down the knife fell to. Yup me and Jason do everything together. Even manifest are powers at the same time. Silence followed to my dad came home and Jason told him what happened and then the lovely people from Hammel showed up a few days later. The little moment put a huge wedge in me and my mom's relationship but it wasn't the thing that tore us apart.



Now this time in my life lets name "Experimenting/Trying new things". That was basically what I was doing the whole time I was there. Without my parents there to hover over my shoulders I was meeting new people and I was trying a lot of new things. I was experimenting with my hair and clothes, my new found powers, my hobby's which turned into my passions, and oh lets not forget my sexuality. Lets start with the hair and clothes though. So I threw all my clothes out that wasn't my style the day I got there and cut my hair the second day. My mom was always the one that like my hair long but I thought it was always in the way. I guess this was my big middle finger to her. I put all that pretty long hair in a pony-tail and cut it. I thought it looked very nice and Jason after the shock liked it to. I then proceed to mixing and matching the rest of what I owned with Jason stuff. That is how my tomboyish look came about. When I was done I personally loved my new look. It felt like it was me. The funny thing is sense I wasn't their for awhile before I changed my style a lot of people their thought I was a boy. I know my roommates did and it didn't help I was in the co-ed dorm. Any who I know you want to hear the juicy stuff like when did I figure out I was gay and who made me figure it out so lets dig in.

To say I knew I was gay would be another lie. This just smacked me upside the head and came from nowhere. So hmm where to began. Okay so I was fifteen when I found out that the reason I never found myself like physically attractive to the male organ was because I like females. See I knew it did nothing for me but I thought I would just grow to like it. Kissing guys did nothing for me either but luckily that year I got a new edition to my room. Her name was Stacey and she would end up becoming my new girlfriend on and off to about currently six months and 5 hours ago. Yes I know the exact time don't judge me people I feel it. So lucky for me Lacey wasn't shy at all about flaunting what the good lord gave her around the dorm or bringing her "friend" over and keeping me up all night. Not that I really mind. After awhile i realized I liked looking at her and listing to her when she had those little sleep overs. Long story short she found out, we start hanging out, and we got together. Until recently we have been together off and on sense.

So then came that lovely family dinner and my mother was like "honey do you want some mash-potatoes" to which I responded "yes please and oh by the way everyone i'm gay and have a girlfriend. Wow mom these potatoes smell so awesome" . Of course they all looked at me but I just looked down innocently eating. You can just call me M.J because I was obviously being such a smooth criminal about it. Jason was the first to say something then followed by my dad.

"I totally called it" he said giving me a playful nudge with his arm. "The second I saw you with that girl I knew it". My dad was quiet at first but after a few seconds he smiled to. "That's great honey. When do we get to met your girlfriend". That when my mother looked at my dad crazy and she started going off about god knows what. I wasn't paying attention I was hurt that she was the only one being like this about it and i was mad. You see why I liked my dad and brother more right? This put the last and finally wedge into me and my mother relationship. We haven't been close sense.


See things weren't all rainbow and unicorns with me and Stacey though. I left the grasp of my controlling mother just to go into Stacey's. Yet you know how that first love stuff goes it's hard to let go. Our relationship was very dysfunctional.  She was very controlling and I guess those type of people are attracted to me. I've dated a few girls in between our  many breakups but no one worth mentioning. When we finally broke up I would like to say i got strong enough to tell her I wasn't going to take her crap anymore but she left me for some guy.  Yeah that still stings really bad.

So fast forwarding right now I just got my own apartment, I'm majoring in music and minoring in psychology at Greenview, and I'm working as a waitress in a local restaurant. Sometimes I still go up to Hammel on the weekends to train my powers.  That is where i'm at in life ladies and gentlemen. Just trying to keep my life on track after the breakup.  I have my ups and downs though. So no happily ever after just yet for princess Amelia but it's coming I hope.

Roleplay Example

Alex looked up to see which one of her roommates had entered. "Oh hey nice to see you to Rya" Alex mumbled sarcastically. "What does my hair and tattoo got to do with it?" she said chuckling. Alex smiled mischievously at her comment though. "You're right though, you know I always have ways to get something to drink. Not to mention my secret stash for emergency. I'm just not sure if getting caught with a bunch of horn-dog,loud, and drunk teens playing truth or dare is a smart idea. Some people don't know how to hold their liquor here but on the other hand drunk teens do make for better secretes". She tapped her chin thinking in till she heard Oriel.

She wasn't sure how she felt about him. He was kind of just there in the kitchen most of the time but right now he seemed like he was going to be such a buzz-kill. Which was something she was not going to put up with. She need to relax and apparently so did this guy.


" Don't be such a goody-two shoes Rachel Ray. Plus you know sweetheart telling me not to do something makes me want to do it more". Suddenly she smelled something intoxicating. She got up and headed to the kitchen to follow the smell. "It's funny how my brain works like that huh" she said looking at the oven. She opened it a bit trying to peek inside. "What are you cooking and when will it be done"?

What About You?

Name: Band
Age: late teens
Experience: 3 years off and on. 4 in  June. 
How Did You Find Us? Ad on your site, recommendation?
Ready To Play? Well… are you? (No special word needed - this is just for fun.)

[Amelia Zhao]

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[Kallisti*]

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Hey there Band! Good to see another character of yours!

This application can't be accepted as-is due to formatting errors. Please pick one application style and stick with it - you are free to write the Standard Format in 1st-person if you wish, but the extra formatting due to adding the Free Write segmenting is causing issues. Also, please be sure to check the app for broken tags - there are a lot of strange fonts and things going on here.

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[Amelia Zhao]

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[Kallisti*]

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All right, that's looking much better! Now then, to the edits!

Amelia seems to have this very BIG personality, which I love. However, there don't really seem to be any subtleties to it at all. Are there any situations in which she acts more subdued (not necessarily shy, just less explosively everything)? Also, do people in general get annoyed with her for various reasons? Singing and humming all the time, even if you're very good at it, can be a rather big annoyance for some people; additionally, it almost sounds like she sticks her nose into other people's business with little regard to their wishes... yes? Please explore flaws and subtleties a bit more in the Personality section.

You mention a brother, but and that the pair of siblings manifested at the same time. While this is fine, remember that the age limitations apply to everyone. Make sure to say how old Jason is.

Amelia's early childhood is a little confusing when it comes to her schooling. Remember that federal law states that all children over five must be schooled to the educational standards of their states (whether homeschooled, private/public schools, or something along those lines). The way you describe her schooling is erratic and makes little sense. Please clarify how Amelia was educated during the ages of five and twelve.

And finally, the formatting edits did help considerably. However, the application is still very difficult to read due to the number of grammatical errors present. Remember to capitalize, use proper punctuation, and use the proper rendition of homonyms (words that sound the same) especially their/there/they're. Grammar is very important and helps everyone find information quickly and easily.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask staff! Otherwise, bump when these edits have been made!

[Amelia Zhao]

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[Admin!]

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