Cristobal Scaglietti Autieri

[Cristobal Autieri]

The Basics

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Name: Cristobal Autieri
Nicknames: Cristy (hates this name)
Age: Sixteen.
Orientation: Closeted Bisexual.
Desired Rank/Job: Student.
Powers: Perfect Immune System – This mean’s nothing harmful, or un-harmful could enter Cristobal’s body. Meaning he can’t get sick, he can’t get high, nor can he get the germs he needs to stay healthy. Otherwise, Cristobal Become’s immune to all existing poisons, bacteria and diseases.
Chemical Absorption - to metabolize toxic chemicals.

The bad part about Cristobal's powers is that when ever more bad things try to enter his body, his power would automatically activate. Because of this happening, his muscles would tense up leaving him temporarily paralyzed. The more this happens, the more weak he becomes. Thus sending him to a deeps state of unconsciousness.
Play By: Harvey Newton.

The Details

Hair Color: Brown, with dirty blonde highlights.
Eye Color: Icy blue!
Any Piercings? Nope.
Any Tattoos? Yes, has a tattoo sleeve, running down left arm. However, he does have a rose on his right bicep.
Any Scars? On hip, for getting cut with a dirty blade.
General Appearance:

Standing at six feet tall, Cristobal is a skinny, but handsome teenager. Cristobal's skin is rather pale but toned , his frail body make him a target for bullying more often. Because of that, Cristobal got tattoos with his parent's consent. He has a nice white smile, which isn't perfect. His smile was created by large and strong braces, that was given to him when he was twelve. Cristobal's hair is always shampooed and conditioned, he being rather flamboyant about his features. Like his hair, the rest of his body is clean and well groomed as well. Before Cristobal was often known to be goofy hilarious, thus always experimenting with his clothing. He always wears skinny jeans, with a v-neck or a cardigan. Cristobal's aura always gives off a nice energy to other people, causing him to have more friends, and less bullies.

Personality: Cristobal is shy, kind, mischievous and verbally flexible, sadly Cristobal has the habit of verbally being a smart-alec against everyone - sometimes the people that he cares for. Cristobal is funny, goofy, impulsive and incapable of taking anything short of a direct attempt on his life seriously. But fortunately, Cristobal shows respect and manners to everyone around him, even younger people. If he is talking to a female he uses the term "ma'am", or when he's talking to a male he uses the word "sir".

Usually, people would ask him not to do that, because it makes them feel guilty of his manners.Cristobal's shy personality means that he's often the subject of others' ridicule and abuse. However, he almost completely lacks the capacity to feel embarrassment, this happens because Cristobal is usually optimistic. Which is why he has many friends, giving off a good aura around him. Most of the time when his fellow Hammel students are down, Cristobal cheers them up with his sensitivity and optimism.

Usually when angered out of optimism, Cristobal tries to calm down, but he has a history of anger problems. Once when he was in the fifth grade, a fellow child called him an "emo faggot". Cristobal immediately stretched over his desk and jabbed a pencil into the child's mouth, choking him almost to death. Obviously this granting Cristobal an expulsion from the school and legal authorized anger management classes.

Fortunately, the anger management class is the reason why Cristobal is optimistic. Despite Cristobal's frailness, he seeks confidence in his body. Luckily, Cristobal is rarely sad. When Cristobal was thirteen his mother died of brain cancer. He was deeply sad about it, but he obviously displayed optimistic vibes, which cheered up his family.

Your Vices

Likes:
- Smoking weed, even though it doesn't get him high.
- Trying out cocaine, even though it doesn't have an effect on him.
- Being the only one in the family with out a cold.
- The fact that if a zombie plague comes, he'd be immune to the virus.
- Getting good grades, obviously?

Dislikes:
- The side-effects of his powers.
- Being bullied for body structure.
- Having a feminine figure.
- Being the only happy one in a depressed room. (His mother's funeral)
- His mother's death.
-Cancer.
- Irresponsible teenagers.

Strengths:
- Math, or Algebra.
- Being Bullied.
- Running from bullies.
- Doing homework.
- Being nice to people.
- Making friends.

Weaknesses:
- Being strong.
- Sports.
- Drawing.
- Side-Effect's of powers.

Fears:
- Raccoons.
- Intimidating bullies.
- His powers.
- Failure.
- His power disappearing, and all the sicknesses would bestow upon him.
Secret:Is bi-sexual, shh.

Family Ties

Father: Giacomo Autieri.
Mother: Luisella Scaglietti-Autieri.
Siblings: Illario Paciello (Brother, Twenty six, Police Officer, and Non-Powered.)
Any Other Important People:Pets count

History

Cristobal was born to a happy married couple, who already had their first accident. The cheap condom, and the illegally taken birth control pills didn't show signs of working. Once Cristobal was born, his older brother's life went to hell. Cristobal got everything he wanted, unfortunately, his family was broke. This lead his father into organized crime, the crime lead to his father being imprisoned for a faulty weapon charge for four years. When Cristobal was four, his mother ranted on the phone with his father about her being a single mother, taking care of two kids. But luckily Cristobal was a smart kid, he understood what his mother meant, and that's when he noticed why men picked up the other kid's from Pre-K.

Several months later, Cristobal's father came home, unsure to his second son's features. He was used to seeing Illario, but not Cristobal. His "father", Giacomo didn't see the resemblance in Cristobal. For days Cristobal's father would argue with his mother about how she cheated on him. Unfortunately this was true, Luisella admitted on cheating on him, with a man named Vincent Larenzo. But Cristobal was Giacomo's child. Five years later, on Cristobal's ninth birthday, Vincent decided to head into town. Vincent was a nice man, he seemed as if he would've been the perfect parent for Cristobal. Because of this, Cristobal was mad at his mother for days for not having Giacomo as a husband. Luckily as a "birthday present", Vincent proposed to Luisella Scaglietti.

At the age of ten, Cristobal was introduced into Mrs. Walshe's class room. It was a class room of a private school that his parents could barely afford. There were snobby kids, from left and right, and to right and left. And of course, the snobbiest kid of all, Jared Bartowski. His parents were rich gold cultivators, who originally came down from England. Jared sat in the exact seat across from Cristobal. Weeks after settling into the new school, Jared called Cristobal an "emo faggot". Because of this remark, Cristobal stretched over the desk, stuffing his pencil into Jared's throat. This leading Jared into choking onto the pencil, luckily, the inventors of the common pencil invented fake lead. Because of this Cristobal was expelled from this nice private school, and sent to legal authorized Anger Management classes. His parent's were relieved, but when they got the hospital bill; they weren't anymore.

Cristobal was sent to the principles office, with the warning of a three-day suspension. Obviously, the three-day suspension lead to anger management classes hosted by Mr. O'Dunne. Usually whilst attending the useless class, they reluctantly said that the students should look on the brighter side in everything. This creating the optimistic know-it-all Cristobal.

At the age of twelve, Cristobal's family got a terrible virus called the Oceatus Flu. The Flu was extremely contagious, meaning it spread around his family quickly. The flu contained of coldness, indigestion, nausea, migraines, and the occasional runny nose. Cristobal didn't feel the slightest of sickness from his family. He just carried on, doing his natural chores, which was taking care of his family. After the sickness got out of their system, Cristobal tried to smoke weed.

The four of his friends took a few puffs and they were high into the clouds, Cristobal felt slightly jealous of them being high, he took harder bullets of the blunt. Nothing happened. He felt as normal as ever. This happened to the point where, Cristobal finished the whole blunt by himself, not high at all. Suddenly, young curious Cristobal, fell towards the ground and started twitching. Twitching so much that, his body came to a halt and laid there for hours! His under influenced friends struck into a laughter of his fidgeting. Ashley, his only not high friend, called the police. Of course, Cristobal's friends ran to safety, called their homes. The ambulance and the police came to the scene, after finding their way in the hidden woods. The police immediately smelled the marijuana, but had no proof of it being there. Once taken into the ambulance, they ran a few blood test, but something weird happened. The government workers nodded towards each other, and then grinned. The EMT workers called some people called “Recruiters”, and told them all about Cristobal’s blood. Within two hours, the recruiters came, and talked with the officers. After Cristobal was up and moving again, they asked him to pee in a cup. The police escorted him to a hidden part of the woods. After doing so, they tested his pee, not finding any signs of drug use in it. The story Cristobal used was that, he found three boys smoking, and they jumped him.

The recruiters took Cristobal home to his mother, and his step-father, Vincent Lorenzo. They spoke for a couple of hours, and Cristobal’s mother broke out in tears. She suddenly went upstairs and packed most of Cristobal’s stuff. Ilario was ecstatic that his brother was going to leave the home, to a school filled with weird kids. It was his dream. The recruiters discussed how Cristobal had a special rare meta-gene, that was tapped into his blood. They said the genes read that, Cristobal’s meta-ability was that he had a Perfect Immune System. Meaning no toxins, no germs, and most definitely any poisons could get in his body. In the gene sample they've noticed how there was a big side-effect to this power. But that didn't stop his parents from pleading. They were crying and arguing how they shouldn't take their innocent twelve year old. After all, Cristobal wasn't innocent. Therefore that was the discovery of a new meta-human.

Roleplay Example

Cristobal was having a bad day, he received an F in Physical Education. Well they did have a point of failing him but... Was that really necessary? No one would need P.E. In their life anyway. Cristobal ranted on and off in his head, walking along the campus of Hammel. Hammel was a good school, in fact it was a school for meta-humans. After the Government tried to lock 'em out, a brave man or woman made a school for the unfortunate kids to hone their abilities, and get their academic education in. Despite the fact that some of the kids took advantage of this place, and some hated this place, it was "Grade A". Still walking down the large campus, Cristobal saw a child walking around the campus asking for help.

Other students with their messenger, or jansport bags didn't stop to mind him. They all had to go to class, but luckily Cristobal had a free period. "What's wrong man? Y'need help?" Cristobal innocently asked the kid. The kid nodded upwards to Cristobal, pointing towards his map. Cristobal still didn't get it. The boy quickly took out a pen, and wrote down on the back of the map: "I have the ability to shut voices on and off, and I just shut mine off. I AM LOST! CAN U HELP ME?" Cristobal struggled to read his hand writing, but he caught up. The sixteen year old male smiled down towards the little boy. And nodded.

Placing his right hand upon the boy's left shoulder, leading him towards the cafeteria to show them where they eat. "This is where we eat, the food's good here," Cristobal said to the boy. Leading him out the door across campus towards the gym. "And here's my least favorite place, the Gym. You do all sorts of activities here, you'd probably hone your meta-human gifts here most of the time." Said Cristobal, walking towards the Boy Dormitories. Looking at the boy's schedule seeing what room he resides in, Cristobal smiled. "You're in the room right next to mine," Pointing towards the upstairs door, towards the right. "That's all you reall need, there's more, but I gotta' go. Hahaha.. See you around when your voice's back on." Cristobal said in a rush, when his free period was almost over.

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What About You?

Name: Jacob, friends call me Jake.
Age: Eighteen.
Experience: A couple of months, on another role-play.
How Did You Find Us? RPG-D.
Ready To Play? this is just for fun.

[Raena *]

Unfinished
Please fill out all sections of the application, you seem to have forgotten the General Appearance.

In regards to his history: He likely would have gotten in more trouble for shoving a pencil into another student's throat and graphite is non-toxic. Recruiters would have found him within a couple weeks of his power manifesting and for reassurance, the meta gene is detected by a simple blood test. They would not have purposely injected him with diseases.

Once you've finished this application, just let anyone on staff know and we'll look at it again. ^_^

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[Cristobal Autieri]

Edited.

[Dryope *]

Almost

First please take out the (Done) tags.

There are a few issues I'd like to discuss. The first is his drug use. I understand that the drugs don't get him high, but as the side effect mentioned for his power is temporary paralysis when toxins enter his body I am confused as to why he would continue to take drugs since they would presumably trigger his side effect. Would you mind clarifying?

My other concern is the amount of tragedy in his history: Unplanned pregnancy, his father in jail, then the discovery of his illegitimacy, divorce, his mother's death, and violence against another student is very dramatic. None of these elements are problematic on their own, but taken as a whole they're very overwhelming. I would recommend cutting down on some of this. For example, having a spouse in jail is stressful enough to lead to high divorce rates, so it would have been perfectly legitimate for his mother to leave his father without waiting for him to be released. Think of backstory drama as spices: You don't want to use too much, just a little bit to give a nice flavor.

This is a nice start, just tweak a bit and when you're done bump this topic and someone on staff will look at it again!

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[Cristobal Autieri]

Edited.

[Dryope *]

Not Quite

I like that you toned down the tragedy, that's a really great start. So I only have two comments for you.

One is that when they ran the blood tests on him after he was found passed out from smoking they would have detected his meta ability and been recruited at that time rather than later.

The second is there are a few cases where you say that he's friends with everyone. It's completely acceptable to say your character is friendly or that despite being shy he tries to cheer people up if he sees they are down but to say that most people like him veers into dictating how other people react to him. It also contradicts your statement that he is a bully magnet. I would suggest maybe saying that while he's shy he likes people and is kind to them, sometimes veering into playful teasing, and just take out anything about other people's reactions and then just make suggestions when you start a plot page.

Just let me know when you've edited and I'll look at it again!

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[Dryope *]

Accepted

Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to the Hammel Institute! Don't forget your CLAIMS and if you have any questions, just let us know.

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