Sky's writing notebook
Jan 7, 2014 12:55:01 GMT -5
Post by Mia Bell on Jan 7, 2014 12:55:01 GMT -5
This is where I'm going to put all my writings. I would looove it if people did pm me opinions, even if they are criticisms. That's actually why I'm doing this, because I really want feed back. Anything to help me improve my writings.
Most of my writings are going to be cross world fics of some other type of show or book, and Hammel. Or just random writings that have nothing to do with Hammel. There maybe a fic here or there revolving around Hammel and my characters; but I've been wanting to write things outside of the focus of Hammel.
This first one is a fic that I had started for the Secret Santa last year, but couldn't finish it, nor did I think it was very good. So I'm going to post the first part (I'm going to post my writings in parts) here.
Endless Wonder
In a small town, called Univile in South Dakota is the home to a warehouse that is known as ‘America’s attic’. There are strange things happening around the whole world, and the agents who are connected to this particular warehouse try to stop the strange things that are happening. Decades have gone by since the first warehouse; warehouses were destroyed, or moved; agents were killed or worse; but that is the risk these agents are willing to take to keep the world out of harm’s way. Now, the 13th warehouse is looking for new agents; the question is who is up for the job?
Dr. Sean Neville sat at his desk in his office at the Hammel institute in pilot Ridge, Vermont. This was his home, and a home that housed many others. Sean picked up one of his pens and started doing some paperwork. It was moments later when he heard a knock on the door. He looked up with a curious expression, there wasn’t any sessions planned for this time of the day. “Come in.” He stated clearly. He watched as the door opened as a young man walked through the threshold. “What can I do for you Amos?” Amos blinked at Sean when he walked through the door; closing it behind him out of habit. “Uh, Well… Dr. Neville I found this and I wasn’t sure what to do with it. I think it belongs to one of the students… Or maybe staff?” Amos walked up to Sean’s desk and held out the item which Sean took from the boy. The older man looked at it for a moment “This is a cigarette case. Where did you find this?” He asked after motioning for Amos to take a seat as they discuss the item at hand. The boy sat down and watched the item. “Well, I... I found it in the student lounge.” Sean nodded “I see. I will try to find the owner of this item.” It was Amos’ turn to nod “Alright, thank you.” He got up, said his good bye’s, and walked out of Sean’s office, once again closing the door behind him.
Sean looked at the item; he had never seen it before. He had no clue to whom it could belong to in the school; he knew of a few people who smoked. He gave a heavy sigh as he leaned back in his chair. Something felt off about this item, he just couldn’t place why.
A few weeks passed since Amos’ visit to Sean’s office with the cigarette case. He still hadn’t been able to find the owner of the item. Ever since that fateful day, he hadn’t been feeling well. He felt more depressed than he usually was; he even looked ill. His skin was very pale, and it looked like he hadn’t been sleeping at all. His partner, Josh, had started to worry about him, but he tried to reassure the man that he was fine. However, that hadn’t been enough; they went to the hospital just to find out what could be wrong, though doctors couldn’t find anything wrong. It was something that made Josh worry even more; and it was starting to worry him as well.
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Claudia Donavon and Steve Jinx got off the flight from South Dakota; they were now in the small town of Pilot Ridge. They are on a mission; they were looking for a certain item. “I can’t believe there are meta humans. I didn’t think it was possible” Steve stated. “Dude, haven’t you learned by now that what’s impossible is most likely possible?” Claudia replied. Steve looked at her and raised his eyebrows as he shrugged “Guess not. I’m still getting used to their being artifacts that can bring people back to life.” This conversation went on as the two agents drove to Hammel institute.
The two agents found themselves at Hammel, in the principal’s office. Mrs. Yvette looked at the two strangers in front of her. “Now, what would the secret service and the ATF be doing at Hammel?” The two agents looked at each other and then back at Mrs. Yvette. Claudia cleared her throat “Well, Ma’am… See we work in a special department of the government, we deal with strange occurrences and there have been some… Stranger? Occurrences at Hammel Institute.” Mrs. Yvette raised an eyebrow at this “This is a mutant school; surely you know this. Strange things happen all the time here.” Steve sat up straighter in nervousness, “Yes, we know about that. But, there have been stranger things happening here and we just wanted to look into it.” Mrs. Yvette still wasn’t convinced this was something important that actually needed to be looked into. “What kind of stranger things?” The agents glanced at each other again, it was now Claudia’s turn to speak up. “We have noticed that a lot of students have become, well happier over night. Now I know it might be a meta-power or it actually could be something else. So, we would like to look into the something else.” “If that’s alright with you Ma’am.” Added Steve with a bow of his head. Mrs. Yvette nodded “Very well. You may look into this matter.” Both Claudia, and Steve bowed their heads to the older woman and said ‘thank you’
Most of my writings are going to be cross world fics of some other type of show or book, and Hammel. Or just random writings that have nothing to do with Hammel. There maybe a fic here or there revolving around Hammel and my characters; but I've been wanting to write things outside of the focus of Hammel.
This first one is a fic that I had started for the Secret Santa last year, but couldn't finish it, nor did I think it was very good. So I'm going to post the first part (I'm going to post my writings in parts) here.
Endless Wonder
In a small town, called Univile in South Dakota is the home to a warehouse that is known as ‘America’s attic’. There are strange things happening around the whole world, and the agents who are connected to this particular warehouse try to stop the strange things that are happening. Decades have gone by since the first warehouse; warehouses were destroyed, or moved; agents were killed or worse; but that is the risk these agents are willing to take to keep the world out of harm’s way. Now, the 13th warehouse is looking for new agents; the question is who is up for the job?
Dr. Sean Neville sat at his desk in his office at the Hammel institute in pilot Ridge, Vermont. This was his home, and a home that housed many others. Sean picked up one of his pens and started doing some paperwork. It was moments later when he heard a knock on the door. He looked up with a curious expression, there wasn’t any sessions planned for this time of the day. “Come in.” He stated clearly. He watched as the door opened as a young man walked through the threshold. “What can I do for you Amos?” Amos blinked at Sean when he walked through the door; closing it behind him out of habit. “Uh, Well… Dr. Neville I found this and I wasn’t sure what to do with it. I think it belongs to one of the students… Or maybe staff?” Amos walked up to Sean’s desk and held out the item which Sean took from the boy. The older man looked at it for a moment “This is a cigarette case. Where did you find this?” He asked after motioning for Amos to take a seat as they discuss the item at hand. The boy sat down and watched the item. “Well, I... I found it in the student lounge.” Sean nodded “I see. I will try to find the owner of this item.” It was Amos’ turn to nod “Alright, thank you.” He got up, said his good bye’s, and walked out of Sean’s office, once again closing the door behind him.
Sean looked at the item; he had never seen it before. He had no clue to whom it could belong to in the school; he knew of a few people who smoked. He gave a heavy sigh as he leaned back in his chair. Something felt off about this item, he just couldn’t place why.
A few weeks passed since Amos’ visit to Sean’s office with the cigarette case. He still hadn’t been able to find the owner of the item. Ever since that fateful day, he hadn’t been feeling well. He felt more depressed than he usually was; he even looked ill. His skin was very pale, and it looked like he hadn’t been sleeping at all. His partner, Josh, had started to worry about him, but he tried to reassure the man that he was fine. However, that hadn’t been enough; they went to the hospital just to find out what could be wrong, though doctors couldn’t find anything wrong. It was something that made Josh worry even more; and it was starting to worry him as well.
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Claudia Donavon and Steve Jinx got off the flight from South Dakota; they were now in the small town of Pilot Ridge. They are on a mission; they were looking for a certain item. “I can’t believe there are meta humans. I didn’t think it was possible” Steve stated. “Dude, haven’t you learned by now that what’s impossible is most likely possible?” Claudia replied. Steve looked at her and raised his eyebrows as he shrugged “Guess not. I’m still getting used to their being artifacts that can bring people back to life.” This conversation went on as the two agents drove to Hammel institute.
The two agents found themselves at Hammel, in the principal’s office. Mrs. Yvette looked at the two strangers in front of her. “Now, what would the secret service and the ATF be doing at Hammel?” The two agents looked at each other and then back at Mrs. Yvette. Claudia cleared her throat “Well, Ma’am… See we work in a special department of the government, we deal with strange occurrences and there have been some… Stranger? Occurrences at Hammel Institute.” Mrs. Yvette raised an eyebrow at this “This is a mutant school; surely you know this. Strange things happen all the time here.” Steve sat up straighter in nervousness, “Yes, we know about that. But, there have been stranger things happening here and we just wanted to look into it.” Mrs. Yvette still wasn’t convinced this was something important that actually needed to be looked into. “What kind of stranger things?” The agents glanced at each other again, it was now Claudia’s turn to speak up. “We have noticed that a lot of students have become, well happier over night. Now I know it might be a meta-power or it actually could be something else. So, we would like to look into the something else.” “If that’s alright with you Ma’am.” Added Steve with a bow of his head. Mrs. Yvette nodded “Very well. You may look into this matter.” Both Claudia, and Steve bowed their heads to the older woman and said ‘thank you’
