Band's writing thread!

[Madison Davis]

   
Hey i'm looking to become a better writer, which is one of the reason I actually roleplay, so I was thinking i'll post some stuff on here. It would love some constructive criticism on my stuff. So if you can message me on your opinions on any of the stories I will end up posting that will be great.

So enjoy my first one on how Madison parents came to be married! Bare in mind it's a rough draft and awfully corny in count of me being a hopeless romantic. 

Hey want to get married? A short story based off of Marry You by
 Bruno Mars. 


    Here we were again at our favorite spot like always. It was a normal evening for us nothing out of the usually. My car broke down so we took her truck there to just hang out. So here we are Daisy lying on my chest in the back of her old beat up car looking up at the stars. I was stroking her hair while we both down the bottle of whisky I stolen from my dad cabinet and was getting high. She turns over with those dreamy angel eyes and just looks at me. I do the same finding it hard to believe that this beautiful girl in front of me was all minds. I just caress her face, no words needs to be spoken because the way she looks at me and I look at her was enough words. This moment was so simple yet it was still something in the air besides the smoke. Our hearts just one steady heartbeat as we fell into that comfortable silence for a while. I look at her in that moment and I don’t know if it was look in her eyes or the liquor talking but I just blurt out “I think I want to marry you”.

She looks at me in shock but then she just chuckles, sits up, and takes my drink away and sits it on the other side of her.

“Ok someone has had way too much to drink”. She runs her fingers threw that blonde mane of hers and looks at me weird. “Maybe I should take you back because when you're being spontaneous and leaving me confused their something wrong. It must be the liquor or the Mary J talking”.


    I sit up to and lift her chin towards me and look at her intensely. “Daisy I think… wait no... I know now I want to marry you. At this moment, I look at you and I know I can never love anyone more than I love you. I didn't think I believed in soul mates in till I just looked at you. The way you make me feel…well I want to feel this way waking up to you every morning when I realize that were together and no one else can have you. I know for a fact it’s not the liquor and when I wake up tomorrow everything I’m feeling is still going to be there. Since the moment, I met you you change my life and perspective for the better. If it wasn't for you I’ll be working some nine to ten job right now just because that’s what every expects of me. You taught me how to be bold and go after what my hearts really want no matter what and that’s you. I don’t want to wait either I want to marry you right now. Let’s go find a chapel and get married right now because I can’t wait any longer. You’re the one who says most weddings are overpriced and overrated. So let’s just do it. I don't care if it’s just us because we only need us to celebrate our love. It’s going to me and you against in the end anyway."


She looks at me speechless studying me in till her faces soften. “I… I don't know what to say."


“How about you say yes to me instead of no because I know you feel this way too. I can tell every time you look at me. So before you say anything we have to make this official”. I hop out the the truck motioning for her to come with me, and open the car doors looking threw my jacket. 
"What are you doing George?" She right behind me.
I keep rummage thru my pocket for the ring pop I bought a couple days ago and when I finally found it I kneel down in front of her. “I’m sorry I can't get you a real ring because after I tell my mom I’m dropping out and marrying you I’ll probably get cut off” I joke before getting serious again. “Daisy Carol will you do me the honor of being my wife and having blonde little blonde flower children with me”?


    She smiles a smile that warms my heart. “I don't need a real ring to show how much you love me and of course I'll marry you”. I place the cherry RingPop, which so happened to be her favorite flavor, on her finger. She pulls me to my feet and we kiss our hands roams free as we did so. She grabs my hand and pulls me inside of the truck not once breaking in till she spoke. “Are we going to sit here and makeout or are we going to get married”?



I woke up first noticing our bodies where entangled in each other and my hand with the freshly tattoo ring held her hand so tight I thought I was going to break her wrist. I let go which caused her stir a bit waking up and looking around maybe forgetting we rented the hotel room for the night when things got a little ‘intimate’ after the ‘wedding’. Which I’m not going to lie makes me a little nervous that she looks confuse. How gone was she last night? Would she want to end it as fast as it got started thinking it was a dumb drunken mistake? She looks at me thru sleepy eyes a small smile forms on her face. “Morning sweetheart."

“Morning Daze. Um so you remember everything that happened right?” I ask her my anxious getting the better of me.

“Yeah…tell me how could I forget”?

“So where do we go now”?

She looks at me and gave me a deep kiss and then she lays back down. “If you mean how I feel you have nothing to worry about baby. So now we spend the rest of our lives together but first I'm going back to sleep” she says grabbing my hand. “Make sure you get your rest we have a long day ahead of us if we're telling your mom”. She told me she loves me now and forever and I of course respond with the same. She closes her eyes and I hear her mumble under her breath. “Miss Daisy Travis, huh I like that." As she falls back to sleep I look at her knowing this had been the right decision. Now the only problem now was convincing my parents that.

[Madison Davis]

(Short story about characters i'm going to bring to Hammel)

As the cab finally reached her parent's restaurant slash house Morgan could feel her heart start to beat. It has been five years now since she left to Paris and she hasn't seen her family or hardly kept in contact sense. It wasn't that she didn't miss them the whole time she was in Paris. She just felt rather guilty about leaving and not telling anybody. They were such a tight knit family who told each other everything. Especially the Munroe children. Now so much has change sense she was gone though. She heard her ex fiance is getting married again, Mathew  is in college and going to be taking over the restaurant, her dad once so fit for a man his age now had cancer, and her little brother Michael was now her little sister Michelle and started at Hammel. Not to mention she did some major growing up herself while she was away. Though she was finally home she knew the city that she grew up in was going to feel like a strange new place.

She let out a heavy sigh, paid the cab driver, and got her things and walked in the restaurant. She instantly relaxed a little as she looked around. Everything so far was the same from when she left and that brought her a little comfort. "Oh my god M&M is that you?" said a unfamiliar female voice.  Morgan turned to see excited young teen girl who was running up to her. She wrapped her arms around her waist embracing her. Is this M.J? She had seen a few pictures of his .. uh her new look now but in person it was way different. It was no trance of the her brother who she left behind.  He had a shape and small boobs and everything. If you didn't know he was a boy before you never would of guessed. "I thought your flight got in tomorrow. God I've missed you so much Tay". 

"Oh my god I've missed you to and I took a early flight to surprise you guys". When Micheal let go all Morgan could do was look at her little sister. It made Michelle nervous because for the past couple of week all she could think about was what Morgan would think of her transformation. Though she hasn't seen her in so long she still valued her sisters opinion like always. "Wow you have grown and change so much" Morgan finally said. 

"What do you think?" she said in a nervous tone. She smoothed out her skirt she was wearing with her hand. Of course she didn't mean just about her look she meant everything involving that. "I mean I haven't had surgery or anything. They want me to wait tell i'm eighteen for that but they are letting me take the hormone pills. I don't mind that much. Urgh i'm sorry i'm talking to much because i'm nervous".

"I always wanted a little sister. Who knew I already had one" she said with a smile that made M.j smile in return. "You look amazing Michael... uh.. Michelle". That was something she would find hard saying. "I'm so sorry I wasn't around to see you threw this. I know it must of been hard on you".

"Don't start getting all mushy and apologetic on me sis. You had to do what you thought you had to do back then. Your going to be around now and that is what counts. Daddy and Mamma going to be so happy to see you know. Oh and Mathew eventually when he stops being so bitter. Speaking of the devil". Out came Mathew from the back with a smile on his face in till his eyes landed on Morgan. "Look who it is Mat" M.J said excitedly. Morgan stood their awkwardly with one hand in her pocket and her other hand waving a bit. She knew he was mad at her but she thought once he saw her everything would go back to normal. Judging by the look on his face she decided she was so wrong.

"Huh so I see. M.J mama was calling you go see what she wants". 

"Oh okay. Here Tay let me take your bags to your room. When I get done with whatever mamma wants you have to tell me all about Paris okay". She grabbed her bags and ran up the stairs that lead to the apartment above. 

Mathew didn't say anything to Morgan. Instead he went and started back in the kitchen to make sure everything was ready before they open in a few hours. He thought he at least had another day to deal with the fact she was coming back and now here she was. He had to admit he missed her so much and was glad she was back but he was still mad at her for leaving in the first place. Plus if their dad didn't get sick who know how long it still would of been before they saw each other again. "So...Mat" she said trailing behind him. "M.J a girl now how different is that. I would like to say it took me by shock but I sort of called it" she said trying to make conversation. 
"Yeah it's different" he said nonchalantly leaving it at that. 
"So how's dad been doing?" she tried again.
"You would know if you would have been here" he said coldly.
"Your being unfair Mat".
 "No leaving your fiance and ruining off to Paris with your asshole ex is not fair. You not telling anyone your leaving and not keeping in touch like we did something is what's not fair. Me i'm just stating a fact Morgan. Oh and if your planning on running off again can we at least heads up. That way i prepare myself to pick up the damage your going to leave behind".

She had nothing to say to that which is why she was glad her mother walked into the kitchen. As soon as she saw her she came up and hugged her for awhile. "M.J told me you took a early flight and you were here. Oh my my baby aren't you a sight for sore eyes. My little chubby bunny has grown up". Chubby bunny was a childhood nickname that she got when she was younger that she hated. It remind her of her fat days. It was one of those names she could never just grow out of though. "Only god knows how much I have truly missed you".
"I've missed you to mom. I have missed all of you so much".
"I could tell by how much you called and wrote" he muttered sarcastically.
"You have to tell us all about your little trip over our Sunday breakfast".
"Trip? She been gone for five years mom that's not a trip. That's moving and living somewhere".
"I was just going to get your father up Morgan. He will be so happy to see you and that our family is whole again. Now I have to go before I burn the food. I just had to see you real quick. Oh and Mathew". 
"Yes mama "?
"Don't give your sister a rough time. Her returning is probably hard on you both". With that she returned back to her food.
 Mathew couldn't believe how calm everyone was being about this. She leaves for freaking five years and everyone was acting like it was just a weekend. Mathew didn't know why he was so supprise though. It was Morgan he was talking about here. He didn't care how they were acting. He wasn't going to forgive her so easily.





(No finish just yet. )